I have no idea whats going on in the second last one. I dont think we need so many shots of the monkey running on the wheel, anna already has some in hers right after this. just stick to him landing on it, and the rotation in this one. short and action packed. Please go a bit into the transition to Anna's scene. right before the fridge hits. maybe instead of showing the fridge comming into the shot after the shadow grows, we can cut to the pov of the fridge comming right down on us and everything going black. shit, that wont work, keep in mind the camera is just about to go into the monkeys mouth so we cant have two black screens in the same 10 seconds.... maybe do the thing adam thought of where the fridge keeps going down and the camera pans up, right before we see it hit the scientists and the blackness of the fridge quickly pans into the sillouette of the hill.
Ok I will clear up this borads and you do make a good point now that I look at the in sequence they are not really translating well . I will do them again and get them to you ASAP.Thanks for the feedbackGemal