Also just a bit of suggestions for script- the mad scientist - we can make him really intimidating - to the point where it's funny. For a closely related example- if we take Freddy's character designs of gangsters/ thugs, they are not just badass; they are so over the top badass that they are funny. Anyways the reason why I say this is because we don't really feel for the monkey- the scientist was not really that rude or mean to the monkey. We don't have a sense for the karma. I'm not saying to change anything major. However let's just say for the intro of the scientist; he comes out of the shadow slowly with a squeaky wheel chair- and the shadow is still covers his face-he says something in a really menacing tone like - hello monkey (or whatever his name is) and does like a icy/ crazy - but not diabolical- laugh. - and does the mr. burns finger tip thing- (excellent?) - Anyway just suggesting that we make a villain out of the crazy scientist so we feel for the monkey and the audience feels good when the scientist gets covered with the vultures and what not.
-Another thing if people find the robot voice offensive- you can just use an untraceable accent? maybe?
-Lastly instead of a everyday science monkey- is it possible to change it to a baboon? Because every show/ movie did something with a monkey and science- baboon is still a monkey - but looks far more interesting -maybe just a new layer on a pile of unoriginality?
-To summarize add a bit of dark humour to the otherwise just plain goofy scientist?
-accent over robot voice?
-Science Baboon over Science Monkey?
If it's too late, or the suggestions aren't that constructive, then don't worry about it- I'm just thinking on the top of my head...
Salehin Nobi
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